Thursday, August 8, 2013

Do not enter



Do not ENTER 

Chapter 1

 "Ladies and Gentleman, today finally I could bring you guys to a  Utopia. Machine, the Gullope !!"
Dr. Justin William, the famous brain nerve scientist, screaming highly and the stage open. 

There were 5 big egg shaped machines were there. Lots and lots of people were watching Gullope. Dr.William had use his all of his passion and time for 30 years for this machine Gullope. 
Now it is 2089, Dr. William is over 75 years old. His briliant invention finally could used for people in public. The first  participation were James, Andrew, Tom, Lucy and Angela. Mr. Andrew Johnson, however he is a rival of Dr.William. He was also a brain medical subject doctor. Dr. Johnson doesn't like Dr. W (William) and he just wanted to measure William's knowledge of Brain nerves. Therefore he participate on this first invention. However we should know that Johnson does not like and even hate William.

Chapter 2

 The Gullope is a machine that bring people into their Utopia by brain nerves. Therefore 5 people's individual thinking make a one Utopia and let them to that fake world. In the Justin's office there are super computer that control the fake world. The fake world is also called Gullope. Finally Dr.W's invention, Gullope left only 10 seconds to start.
 5...4...3...2...1... start!! Everybody could see what they are doing in Gullope by big  screen. At first the everything was good and ordinary the Gullope made by 5 people was fantastic  and beautiful.
 
However after 9 minutes later the big screen became black. People cannot see anything and cannot hear anything. Then  also after 17 minutes later there was a little problem in Super computer too. Dr. W felt abject and desperate. The  30 years of his everything blew up. However the more important thing was participation's safety. While there was problem in outside the inside Gullope also become strange. The world become dark and feel scary and dirty. 


Dr. W strongly thought there were no any problem in his invention. The only way that it can be happen is by the participation. He could guess a one person but there was no any evident. He use speakers and talk participation in Gullope. 
" Attention, attention ladies and gentlemen, there are some problem in Gullope and it is because of one of you guys. I can see you with super computer so help me to catch a suspect."


Chapter 3

 After the announcement 5 people cannot all believe each other. They do not even go with each other and talked each other. Then, suddenly also the Gullope and Supercomputer become black out a second. And then Tom was lay down by bleeding in his stomach. Some glasses were pocked in his neck and legs. Skull was broken by strong brunches and the two hands were cut offed and moving themselves. Both 4 people in Gullope and Dr. William were paniced by tom's death. 

Chapter 4

 4 people can even over reacted  by just winds and some birds sound. At that time Dr. Johnson picked Lucy as a suspect. 
"You, you did it, right ? I saw your hands were bleeding and you were the nearest person by Tom !" 
However Lucy deny it strongly.
" No way, I think Mr. Johnson you are a suspect." 
" What did you say !! There are no any reasons or a evidence !! How dare you ..."
Dr. Johnson tried to punch Lucy, and thankfully others prevent that awful situation we think. 
" Come down, relay everybody, I understand you guys but think rationally. Please Come down and raise your hands and put them behind your hands" Dr. William says.


Chapter 5

 Suddenly light off and black out again, 4 people cannot see everything. There was a short screaming and when it become normal surprisingly Angela was hanging up side down in the tree with pierced with knife in her stomach.
" Oh my Gosh, how can this happen !!"
Angela's best friend Lucy cried and screamed. Now there are no any sounds by 3 people. They extremely disbelief each other. Also they over reacted so much that because of just a small sounds they fight each other hardly and violently.They fought with tree branches, rock and even by their hands. Dis belief about 'suspect is one of three' make people fight and wound each other. While Andrew gonna stand up and run to James, Gullope black out.


Chapter 6

 Actually while 3 people was fighting each other Doctor Justin was keep trying to save people but anything did not system well. Even speakers become error too. The last black time but the James disappeared.


Chapter 7

 Lucy and Dr. Andrew just a two left. Finally Justin thought one of them who survive will be a criminal. However after the last Black out all Lucy and Dr. Andrew dead. There was just a letter 
"Do not enter in my place"



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2 comments:

  1. Good job! I enjoyed your endings

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  2. I enjoyed your story very much.
    I was hoping you would add additional photos to your chapters.

    Great detail!

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